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From "Dennis E. Hamilton" <dennis.hamil...@acm.org>
Subject RE: Editing Download page
Date Sun, 24 Jul 2016 16:25:28 GMT
Marcus,

A little correction here and there ...

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Marcus [mailto:marcus.mail@wtnet.de]
> My technical additions need a bit more time but in the meantime here are
> my text suggestions:
> 
> Box headline:
> "Developers Needed"
> 
> Box text:
> "Are you a software developer with C++ skills or have you deeper
> knowledge about building software? Do you like to work in open source
> projects and you are familar with the English language? Then come to us
> and help Apache OpenOffice to grow."
[orcmid] 

s/you are familiar/are you familiar/

or maybe better, "are you proficient in English?

s/Then come/Come/

s/to grow/expand/

> 
> Box mouse-over:
> "The Apache OpenOffice project need software developers to grow its
> base"
[orcmid] 

s/need/needs/

Or how about,

 "The Apache OpenOffice project seeks developers to take part in expanding its activities."

and I would like to see more discussion too.


> 
> Not perfect but a start - for discussion and improvement.
> 
> Marcus
> 
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